Just think, you’re looking for a place to stay for a while, out of the way but not too isolated, and you don't know where to go. Well, we have just the place for you.
Located in a lovely spot on the edge of town, this calm serene camp offers a chance to escape the hassles of everyday life. Suitable for all ages, one of the things that make this camp so special is a beautiful clear lake running right through camp, great for rafting and feeding the eels, if you're game.
So, as far as sleeping arrangements go, you have the choice for either bringing a tent, or sleeping in the Marae next to the kitchens.
As you wander through the foliage you may come across an old obstinate course, filled with all sorts of activities and fun, and you don't want to miss the flying fox located just across the bridge!
Plus, if rivers aren't your thing, just a hop skip and a jump away you will find yourself at a gorgeous lake where you can swim, kayak or paddle board till your heart's content.
So once again, if you are looking for a great place to stay, we recommend Omaka
Brooklyn, good use of persuasive language and description to sell Omaka as a place to stay. Don't forget to proofread one last time. We compared the hall we stayed in to a marae. $90
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Fantastic writing Brooklyn!! Great use of words, it was very descriptive, it hooked me in strate away. It was like I was back there at Omaka camp. Great job!!
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