Once upon a haystack, there was a lonely farmer who lived in the middle of a thriving countryside. He was getting old, and although he was a hard worker, he felt it was nearly time to give up the farm and retire.
One day, he was feeding out to his livestock as usual, when he saw a group of school children coming down the road. When they reached the gate to the paddock, most of them just glanced at him and hurried off, not wanting to dwardle, but one young girl stayed behind. She hung near an old wooden post, and held out an apple she had been eating. One of the old sheep in the paddock hobbled over and took the offering, then nuzzled up to the girl’s hand. For a moment the girl just sat there stroking the sheep, then she looked up at the man with her sky blue eyes and dazzled him with the most beautiful smile he had ever seen. She said one last goodbye to the animals and skipped off, humming to herself.
From then on, every morning the old man got up early to have a look around the lane for the girl before he feed out, but he never saw her again. Eventually he turned the farm into a petting zoo, and people come every day to pat the animals and talk to him so he was never lonely again, but he never forgot that girl with the smile.
This was really nice and descriptive it was so lovely to read and I really liked the idea.
ReplyDeleteCool Brooklyn, I liked how it ended and he turned it into a peting Zoo because now he will feel positive and happy.
ReplyDeleteThat was a really good story with a great moral. You described everything very well. It also had a nice ending.
ReplyDeleteVery creative Brooklyn. I like the way that the farmer moved on from trying to find the girl and used the inspiration of her smile to spread the love. I am sure he would have got a lot of satisfaction out of city folk visiting his farm.
ReplyDeleteThis piece of writing was on a tight time frame so well done. I am thinking a good goal would be to have variety of sentence lengths.
Brooklyn this is a great positive story I really like the way you said she looked up with her sky blue eyes and dazzled him with the beautiful smile. Great job
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